lorenalee

Kindle serial, the first installment was free. It was a good start to the story of McKayla and Matt, but it was so short, the reader doesn't know anything about the main characters, except that they're good in bed together. But in order for me to buy the second part, I need a little more in the way of characterization and not just sex scenes. What little there was, was the usual trope; rich, handsome man with commitment issues meets girl who has the power to change him.

My one note on this book is about one sentence in this book:
„I think with my dick, McKayla… not with my heart.Just a thought. You should try thinking with your brain. You know, the part that's actually made for thinking. It serves me well.”And that's what she said. Hah.